After reading through the article again I clearly see that I missed out on some grave errors. I’ve gone through the article once again and fixed what I deemed to be a mistake such as some embarrassing faults I made with the wording of some of the phrases.
I am usually much sharper than this when it comes to how I edit my articles, this comment was a real wake up call on how I need to take a bit more time while reading through my own articles. In terms of a conclusion, I hoped that the inclusion of the events being used as a Sabaton song would have been enough to tie the article together at the end. I try to end off all of my articles in such a manner usually giving some information about the aftermath of the event. It seems that I could have done a better job here maybe talking about the fate of the Russian Empire after the fortification was taken over.
Thank you for the constructive criticism. It is rare that such a useful comment is posted below one of my articles.